Response to Chris: "A Decade in the Life"
I admire this draft, because the poem reminds the readers of the important events that has happened in the world, and he reminds us in a unique way; he doesn’t tell us, but he asks us how could we forget and by the end of the poem he makes you want to remember every poem by saying, “a single swollen heart can’t”. I also admire the way he started off with a question and the body of the poem is him asking questions and does not give the readers the answer to the very last line of the poem. This draft can use revision; he ends every sentence with a question mark, which throughout the poem was placed correctly, although, capitalization in the beginning of the sentence is needed.
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